crimes of dreams

idk rlly just came up with it please interpret this as u want also read it down as columns then read them if the two columns were connected it sounds kool :)

 The dreamer     sleeping

and                     his spell is

his crime          cast

the moment      it faked

it                         all and all,

killed time       mocking

tolling grains   the craven's call

from the            of the last

hour glass      dying brass

break              taking

the laws     with him

of the past   the light               

The              made of gas

melting       The reaper

ticks           and his sign

come last     "till death part your crimes"

create your    the deeper

destined path   the fall

The keeper     you hear

and his mind  the mourners

regret starts     to call

to unwind    your name

the calling    in this game

pains         it is the end

coming from

the rain

of his loved ones

falling first

"dreaming things no mortal dared to dream before"

Author's Note

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Reviews

[unspokenguilt]

Uhoohwa...cool! (Dreams...what reality kills, hmm...just thinking!)

Nice write!
:)elyssa

[sheerpoetry]

yes i liked.