damn brick

its for a contest hahaha

this one girl was just walking down the street with her walk-men in her pocket listening to a song called BRAINWASHED by nuclear assault, she thinks she's all cool with her jean jacket covered in patches and tight a*s pants, and her long curly brown hair super pretty
she's returning home from hre date with juan. it didnt go so well. so she said "f**k it"

Everything seemed pretty chill you know! the wind blowing on a septermber night and twinkling stars above as if a little girl tossed some glitter in the sky, chewing gum not paying attention to her path she tripped over a brink , she picked up this brick and the second she did that she fell into a hole. a navy blue hole, "AAAAAAAAGH" she looked at her falling place. it appeared she was falling from the skies!
 right along side of the stars she was looking at not that long ago trying to grab on to anything that might stop  her from possibly dying. nothing. all of a sudden a man on a flying skate board grabbed her saving her life.

its was juan, he was gonna take her to his cool place of coolness, she didnt want him,  shed rather die!

"ha ha you fell into my trap"
 now your mine cause i love you and your mine!

"NOOOO ROB HALFORD SAVE ME!!"

the end

Reviews

[nighttimesnoozer]

exactly its a thrashing version of alice in wonderland

[KidJunior]

interesting.. i pictured every detail,, kinda reminded me of alice in wonderland when she fell into that hole

[nighttimesnoozer]

its not a draft, its just a day drream

rob halford is the singer to judas preiest

zeek i get what you mean,, wow thanks for caring :D

[humansalwayswantmore;it..]

I like the idea =] it's funny =] hey...who is...rob halford??

[Zeek4]

I think this one needs more work Snoozer. Not bad for a first draft but try to expand it a bit and see what you come up with.