A trip to hell detention

A trip to hell detention

A Story by nighttimesnoozer
"

a dream that i had about going to hell

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I fall to my dream . . .

My friend and I were at a department, i believe it was  MACY'S, i dont know how the hell we ended  up there, but what ever you know
my Friend jackie is not the kind that rob's man, she told me to watch her back while she puts stuff in her pocket and i was all "hey man what the hell are you doing"
she told me not to worry and to just watch her back, me and her are cool. honest she aint no bad gal, when she was walking out the store, she got stopped by the security cop guy and he told her to empty out her pockets. and so she did
  the evidence was out, she was caught red handed. then the man said "im gonna have to take you you"
and apparently we all knew what that meant, it meant that sh was going to be taken to hell, Hell wasnt the hell your thinking of! hell was some sort of detention hallk for people who arent adults but arent kids you know,  i was like "oh s**t"! i said hey i stole s**t too take me too, the security guy was puzzled and took me in too, the 3 of us waited outside of the store waiting for our ride. i knew we were going somewhere i was expecting something, it was crazy
  a roller coaster cart came up from the ground! wow it was yellow and very old school looking, everything was gonna be fine. i didnt feel scared i didnt feel threaten, she was my friend and im  going to look out for her, even if it gets me in trouble.
we got on and some other kids followed. i sat down to a seat in front of jackie
i was talking to her like nothing happened then driver guy told us all to strap up,

so we did, all of a sudden the coaster was driving in the middle of the road, under the highway and the ground opened up and we fell. a track appeared in green,
we were going to hell!!?

the entrance was cave like and there was bats that flew out  as we went in. the walls were spiky rock and lights from the roller coaster showed the way ther where ever it was we were headed. finally we made it to our destination,
in a neighborhood . . . it was night time, i looked up at the sky to see something fly across the moon, "was that a witch?"
what ever, it was pretty creepy the roads were dry black
it was super pitch dark, so dark that the street lights only lit up what ever the luminous shine was touching other then that you couldnt see a damn thing, the driver lead us in a house were he told us to sit down, and gave us some alcohol and peanut snacks, "this is hell?" the man was giving us some life advice and we were all talking to each other, almost as if this was a get together with friends, i was having a great time, when all of a sudden a lady like inhuman body crawled up next to me, she lifted her self up to me so that i was able to see her face, it was dead faced haunted dark eyes  skin falling and cold scrummy fingers it scared the s**t out of me, the the driver yelled at it to go away, and it disappeared into a shadowy black fume

i curiously wondered in to hallway, i guess i was looking for the bathroom, and i saw her again, this time she put out her hand as if she needed help, f**k that i aint going im sorry, it seemed like she got mad, because the face she gave me, was a horrid one

i woke up safe on my pillow and warm under my house blanket,

this was a dream. . . what a creepy a*s dream

© 2010 nighttimesnoozer


Author's Note

nighttimesnoozer
i went there

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i went to hell once in a dream.these church ladies picked me up when i was coming from the mall and walking accross the parking lot. they stopped thier car and they were pentecostle church ladies i remember from church when i was younger and they were like, "Get in!" and they shoved me in thier long old lady car. and we drove down the street and you know those sewer holes??...on the curb where the water runs into? well they threw me in there and i fell and ended up in this place that didnt really seem like hell. it was a small room and it was very crowded. too crowded. and there was a round bed. comfy couch thing.and a huge screen tv and ppl were just there playing video games. and they all looked crazy with mohawks and different colored hair but they werent bad ppl. it was enjoyable.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i know huh :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it, sounds like a lot of my dreams, I frequently go to Hell, doesn't seem so bad sometimes.... Just sometimes.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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