Tremble in my soul

To days like these, I'd say don’t fall in love with my beauty for it maybe transient.
Don't fall in love with the glint in my eyes, instead fall for my defiance and my vulnerable eyes.
Don't fall for what captivates you at the first glance because prettiness can be seen everywhere. Fall for the kind of me, you'd like to write books about, that will continue to inspire you by my flawlessness to fill tons of empty pages.
Don't fall for the times when I am all prim and proper, ready to take over the world, fall for my clumsiness because that's my most comfortable self.
Don't fall for me when opportunities come knocking at my door and you see me doing well in life, be there for me instead when I start stuttering because then failures, losses and obstacles begin to de motivate me.
Don't fall for me when you see me chirpy, brimming with all love and laughter, instead try loving me when 'inner war of imbalance, trying to find some balance' kinda voice begins to screech louder.
Fall for my raw and vulnerable side. It's then I promise to give you the best I can, acknowledging each one of your warm breaths that tickle my neck just like cold rain drops trying to ease the troubled soul bringing so much of comfort and solace.
And in the end, when we have established this relationship and only our atoms are left, I promise you'll collide with me.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Liked the concept esp. the choice of your very detoriox words. Today, infatuation has got the realm of love so it's kinda easy to fall in love without leafing through one's life, resulting, having pain, by the end when things ain't go right the way they should have to. Also, what I like about your story is dialogues or very deep sentences that you smash with your concept. Yeah, prettiness is found everywhere. If you wanna fall for something, just fall for her not for what has across outlined circumferences, no matter how many flawless scars she's designed with or how many drastic nights she just trudged through. Very deep and quite an interesting write. It's all about true love that should be faithfully beloved. Looking forward to reading your work!

[Niketa Bhatnagar]

Antonyo and Adams. Thanks for all the motivation and support. I am just testing waters to know how deep do I need to dive and once I have a correct and a detailed understanding of the same, i'd go full throttle with my writings. Thanks for being so honest and blatant. Really appreciate it guys! :)

Also, please help me understand how do I follow your writing? I am a little new to all this. :)

[Antoñyo]

Click on a person's name or avatar/pic and it takes you to their profile where you can see their latest poems or "subscribe" to their writing. Hope that helps

[Antoñyo]

Hits home pretty hard for me. An instant favorite, and great to see when someone "gets it" because (for however briefly) you stopped questioning the sanity in the world, or your own in the times you fail to say to that world, "Stop the spinning. I want to get off!"
Loved reading...really truly,
Thanks for sharing this 100/100