Maybe the one could be you

Maybe the one could be you

A Poem by Nikki
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Just kind of brainstorming, not sure if I like the idea or not yet... I'll finish it and write a guitar part if it grows on me

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Never thought that crooked smile would mean anything to me

Never thought those dark brown eyes would make it hard to breathe

Oh I never thought the way he held me that cold night in November

Could make me feel like this

 

Never thought that dimpled grin would make my heart skip

Never thought I'd love the sight of the little mole above your lip

Oh all those little secrets about me never thought you'd remember

Make me want to know all of his

 

Because he makes me feel like this

 

I can tell exactly what's going on

All my thoughts suddenly gone

Sitting up with you until dawn

I can see exactly what's going through

My mind it's always you

Table for one now party of two

Maybe the one could be you

© 2013 Nikki


Author's Note

Nikki
Again, just an idea, not sure if it's something I want to look into more yet

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lyrically beautiful!
this is so real. like its so transparent.....
i definitely think you should finish it. it starts off really strong and im envisioning how theshort quick stuff happens later but thats up to you.
it sounds really good so far
it kinda reminds me of little things.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nikki

11 Years Ago

Thanks! I actually wrote it months ago (sometime in November, as implied by the lyrics:) ) so when l.. read more
benjammingham

11 Years Ago

nah its ok.....as long as itdoesnt sund the same yu should be fine....
Aww so sweet. Is it about and actual person by chance...? Haha really good

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nikki

11 Years Ago

Yeah it is I usually put some hints in as to who it may be, normally I make them a lot harder to fin.. read more

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Added on January 11, 2013
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Most of the stuff I post on here is going to be lyrics, so try to keep an open mind some stuff just makes more sense with music :) Also I'm kind of a beginner at the whole song writing thing, so yea.. more..

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