Wanna Be with you!!!

Wanna Be with you!!!

A Poem by Nilesh Ratnam
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She has gone away and we are not in touch. I don't know she is now. Every night i get drunk look at her fb pic and think about her!!!

"

as the alcohol continue to batter, 
standing on my balcony 
i watch the feelings drops 
converge into one pool of water;

i wish you were here 
standing next to me 
in this rain soaked night, 
holding hands, scheming of things pretty face of innocent smile

Wondering to myself, so late at night, 
what is it that attracts me to you? 
Thinking to myself, why are you always on my mind? 
What power do you have in what you do?

thinking about where i stood, 
i try to push you out of my mind, 
but every time i push you out of my thoughts, 
you crawl back into my world and fill my eyes;

it’s so hard to keep smiling 
and continue denying what i feel 
i don’t know why, 
a thousand reasons to remember i have none to forget!!!

i can’t go on like this, 
i can’t pretend everything is fine, 
when i just wanna be with you  
hold you tight your thoughts tonight and every night;

© 2015 Nilesh Ratnam


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damn! how i loved this poem ! it is so uncredibly romantic , it truley gave me chills , it's like i know what you're feeling so i'm really out of words to describe how this poem of yours made me feel . God , i'm speechless!! if i find other words i'll let you know hhh thank you so very much for sharing .
Ps: i really hope she's with you ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nilesh Ratnam

9 Years Ago

I never got a chance to express this. Coz it has been 4 years and still waiting for her answer.
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lovergirl

9 Years Ago

ah too bad ! anyway good luck ;)
Nilesh Ratnam

8 Years Ago

Thanks alot.



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damn! how i loved this poem ! it is so uncredibly romantic , it truley gave me chills , it's like i know what you're feeling so i'm really out of words to describe how this poem of yours made me feel . God , i'm speechless!! if i find other words i'll let you know hhh thank you so very much for sharing .
Ps: i really hope she's with you ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nilesh Ratnam

9 Years Ago

I never got a chance to express this. Coz it has been 4 years and still waiting for her answer.
read more
lovergirl

9 Years Ago

ah too bad ! anyway good luck ;)
Nilesh Ratnam

8 Years Ago

Thanks alot.

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Added on March 11, 2015
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