Hollywood

Hollywood

A Poem by Fanicia E.
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About a guy I was very fond of that I'm still having a hard time getting over. Can't get him out of my head, as of yet.

"
I found a paradise in memories of you.

A movie in my mind

With encores by the minute.

A collage of clips I can't seem to dash

Reminds me of feelings that caused me to act rash.

But much like a train wreck or a car crash I can't stop.

So I'll get the popcorn and continue to watch.

© 2017 Fanicia E.


Author's Note

Fanicia E.
Ignore grammar.

This song pretty much reflects how I felt at the time when things start going south :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DcRi3j8sjtU

The lines that stick out the most to me from it are:
"I get so lonely, I forget what I'm worth
We get so lonely, we pretend that this works
I'm so ashamed of myself think I need therapy
I'm sorry I'm not more attractive
I'm sorry I'm not more ladylike"

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Very good work. I love it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fanicia E.

2 Years Ago

Thank you! I appreciate it 😊
T.S. Sky

2 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
oh boy, i love this, not sappy but with a certain dignity and heartache without sounding cliche. Lovely words :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fanicia E.

3 Years Ago

Thank you Ana B.! I'm glad it wasn't corny lol
The 'replays' when we close our eyes and live events again can be both sad or joyous - loved the imagery in your short poignantly penned piece! :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fanicia E.

3 Years Ago

Thank you! I know it's something everyone's been through at some point, including myself, so I had t.. read more
Its a good one. . . i liked it. . short,Simple but very effective . keep sharing

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fanicia E.

3 Years Ago

Thank you!
Another inspiring poem wow! i love your work, just want to go and hammer my head against a wall for an hour to make sure this poem stays in there

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fanicia E.

3 Years Ago

Aw, that's really sweet if not a bit macabre lol. Thank you!
WoodenChair

3 Years Ago

Really loved it!
Fanicia E.

3 Years Ago

I'm glad you did!
You mange to express this dilemma well in a short pathos filled metaphor.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fanicia E.

3 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback 😊
It's great one , i love it, good job fanicia 😊

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fanicia E.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Thanks for reading :)
Nora

3 Years Ago

My pleasure 😊
Fanicia, dear friend.. you might never get over that .. ..

GOING TO SEND IN A MESSAGE BOX, IS TOO PRIVATE.

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really liked it x creative💕 x

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fanicia E.

3 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on June 18, 2017
Last Updated on June 18, 2017
Tags: pinning, love lost, memories, romance

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Fanicia E.
Fanicia E.

Houston, TX



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I'm Fanicia, I read, write, design, and create. I'm from Houston, born and raised. I actually had an account here in high school, but deleted when I stopped writing for a while (if anyone knew sisyque.. more..

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