khamoshi tumhari

Ek chup si aahat hai ye khamoshi tumhari
Bas ek dhime se jasbe ko mehsus karne ka nam hai khamoshi tumhari
Dabe paao koi ret pe nishan chod jaye eaise dil pe kai arman chod jati hai ye khamoshi tumhari
Dil ka haal bayan na hone de eaisi hai ye khamoshi tumhari
Zil ki tarha khamosh tarang jise samzna kahbi bohot mushkil hai ye khamoshi tumhari
Bina lafjo ke gehre jazbat ko samz ne pe majbur kare hai khamoshi tumhari
Naina ki bhasha hum se padhwati hai ye khamoshi tumhari
Khamoshi tumhari
Khamoshi tumhari

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Saddam]

Dil ka haal bayan na hone de eaisi hai ye khamoshi tumhari
Zil ki tarha khamosh tarang jise samzna kahbi bohot mushkil hai ye khamoshi tumhari.

Bada achha lagta hai,
Dhoop mein ped ka saya; bada achha lagta hai,
Labon ye muskurahat; bada achha lagta hai.
Bahut sukun milta hai jab koi apni jaban share karta hai.
Sath hone ka ahsas; bada achha lagta hai.
Bahut hi umda likha hai. Mujhe sukun laga.

[Nivedita...]

Thank you so much it feels really good