The Sixth Wall

Arguments with reflections

       intense disconnections

a mirror talking back       

in malicious fashion;        

 blood, trickles               

between the silver          

and the glass,    

a mind, trapped             

amid two eyes                  

__    twins,      

           talking past. 

butterflies flutter strange;  
black and white,           
red and green              
                 ...raven's wing
              ...shark's fin.
       The revelations, of Two Face  
    speaking twice at one time.  

  a wineglass, forms
  after drinking wine,
  bitter then sweet.
  blue cheese
  into milk,
  Hydras;
  two hearts in one soul.

.traeh a ni sluos owt  
;sardyH  
,maerc no worg  
sldom eulb  
.ssenteews eht at lwocs  
,mlap ytpme eht  
nopu sruop ,eniw  

...the sixth wall

Reviews

[Babe Roxx]

Woooow...the rhyme scheme was do rhythmic and the format of your poetry spectacular...this is Art. Wonderful poetry my friend. :)

[Juan de Rajah]

Thank you Mr. DeValle; admittedly this took some hard work from me.

[Babe Roxx]

You know what...poetry like this needs to be given thought my friend...in time, your words will flow effortlessly...really good stuff, Jaun...write on. :)

[Juan de Rajah]

The flow I can say was easy, but the format was not! Hahahaha.

By the way it's Juan :)

[Babe Roxx]

Sorry bro...I'm on phone...spellchecks keep messing with me while I type on one finger lol.
read moreSorry bro...I'm on phone...spellchecks keep messing with me while I type on one finger lol.

Sa an ka sa Pinas, Pre? Sa an provincia? Ka se kumaka an pinson ko lol biro lang pre lol

[Juan de Rajah]

Oh... my apologies...

[Babe Roxx]

No probs bro. :)

Write on.

[Fréyjä Helv..]

Love the mystifying ethereal feel to this. More like odd dreams. that last stanza with the letters formed like a mirror reflection. I forgot what's that term, it's brilliant...

[Juan de Rajah]

Thank you, I appreciate the comment.