Sweet Bitter Confusion

I wrote this when I was 12. I was in a messed up place. This is just a layer of my young dark confused mind.

Flick me hard,
So I shine.
Flip the card,
Now you're all mine.

The moon the sun,
Why do you have that gun?
The ground the sky,
Are you making me die?

Hands can be held.
Let go and let me fall down.
Allot can be told.

Petals sweet petals,
I crushed you so well.
I fed you some water,
But then you fell.

The wind cruised by.
You walked right beside,
A diseased willow tree.
Oh wait that was me.

Sing a song,
And sing it thorough

I love you so dearly.
With you I see so clearly.
But please don't ever go.
It would hurt me so.

But if you do,
I will surly kill you.

Author's Note

I wrote this four years ago. Though I would still love feedback! Thank you!

Reviews

[мalғy]

I like the way it seemed like a beautiful romance then it just went if you leave I will surly kill you it describes to me or makes me think of how the emotions are overwhelming they make you fall to the point where you would kill just to keep it near you, I really liked it :)

[Nina Arial]

Thank you, I really appreciate this!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

This piece of poetry seems to come from the depths of love, passion and devotion. The lavish language and romantic theme strike appeal to the romantic in me!