I will find a way to you 2

I was on a ship lost at sea
Sailing the crystal water
Under heavens eye looking down on me


The dark night gave birth to clouds in the cover above
Sprinkled cotton with diamonds looking down
Watching me search the lonely seas of love


I am a sailor looking for an island unfound
Hopeful on blind faith
A truth that will always remain unsound


waves have their time
Some up
And some down
such is life
Love has it’s danger
and love has its own thorny crown


But there is no denying the beauty I see
That which shines all around.
Reflecting the visions I see before me



I am on a journey
I will find my way to you
I hope you “sea”
I will navigate by stars
By fait
By any method that brings light to chance
some how you come to me


I will know you;
It is when I look into who you are
And find all of me

Reviews

[R.M.C]

A wonderful metaphoric piece - the sailing of the oceans, searching for the 'one' for you but not knowing what they look like. I would just like to bring a little something to your attention: 6th line from bottom, I just want to make sure you meant to write fait (legal deed, writing, or fact) and not 'fate' (a power that is believed to control what happens in the future)...

[nocool]

haha! thank you for that..
I write off the cuff and in the moment...
and never read over..
so I often miss little stuff like that.

[R.M.C]

Glad I can be of assistance.