Lost

I found your eyes
when I was lost reflecting in the vision of memories eye
those which danced upon the night of Orion’s skies

Pin holed skies of Crystal blue
Some faded by the silver light casting shadows and reflections of you

Shadows danced on the empty walls
bringing memories of you in the empty halls

Silver night sings the moon so bright
Lost in time is the feel of your kiss
The heat of your skin
The sweet of your breath
The eyes reflecting the beautiful you I found with-in

Reviews

[Ashley Arita]

This is amazing. I love it. It almost gives a bit of a Christmas feel. The descriptions are beautiful, making you really wonder how amazing this person is. What I would do is maybe to put more of those descriptions, but that's it. It really is wonderful.

[nocool]

thank you for the kind words. I write as i think, then hit submit :)
I will need to work on my descriptions.

[Ashley Arita]

Your welcome!

[Emily Greene]

I liked this, it was very light (if thats makes sense) and almost whimsical. Was there any particular reason you capitalized "Chrystal"?

[nocool]

Thank you for the input ;)
Chrystal was capitalized by the word editor and I didn't catch it...