Of Time or Heaven

Of Time or Heaven

A Poem by ReversingEvolution4TheBetter

A poem inspired by the thought of Heaven. Where in the universe does it exist?


High above the severed skies of sorrow,

Dark and pure sights reveal a world renown;

Seeking all that brings forth for tomorrow,

Rejoicing nature let your voice resound;


Show us what our future brings forthcoming,

Reveal the way our souls bind with desire;

Every thought saves loyal hearts from numbing,

As hope drowns despair in a burning fire;


Swirls of Heaven open in love's doorway,

As endless harmony sounds out for light;

Warm flames of luster give a high display,

In shapes of every star within our sight;


When you see your makers face in Heaven,

Your soul and mind, pray that they be leavened;

© 2010 ReversingEvolution4TheBetter

Author's Note

Iambic feet may be a little off, it was my first attempt at a sonnet. Feedback is appreciated!

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Sonnets have a way of expressing feelings that other forms can't touch. I love the imagery and flow here =)

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Added on April 19, 2010
Last Updated on April 19, 2010
Tags: Heaven, God, Universe, Wonder



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