A Poem by noname22

A poem i wrote, just want some criticism and help with the title please comment


Our contract implies that you give me a chance to show you the entirety of my affection.

Only if you are ready to lose me as much as you would save me,

let your loyalty lay with me, stay with me and you may enslave me.

No conditions will affect my unconditional affection.

This means that even when things get mean in no means does that mean a means to an end, but new beginning

And in the mean time this is between me and you.

In that outfit, I can tell you got class by the pace you walk through the hall, like you got somewhere to be

All i ask is that you slow down and look  back when i call you.

I tap your shoulder with a hesitant touch hoping the expression that greets me is positive towards my affection...


© 2012 noname22

Author's Note

just want some criticism and help with the title please comment and i just want to know what you think it means, like what the lines sound like they're saying. highschool romance poem

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Added on August 8, 2012
Last Updated on August 8, 2012
Tags: poetry, poem, love, romance, highschool, teenage, teenager



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A Poem by noname22