Look Outside

 

Look outside
See the pouring rain
Each drop is a tear
From someones pain

 

Look at the rain
As it's pouring down
Beating on the roof
Making a pounding sound

 

Feel the rain drops
Let them hit your skin
It will help your worries
From way deep with in

 

Smell that rain
As it's falling in the air
It has it's own fragrance
That it likes to share

 

Feel the rain
As it falls upon your head
Enjoy it for once
Don't be fussing at it instead

 

Look at the rain
From another point of view
Each rain drop could be
Someone crying over you

 

Written 3/8/2014 by Norman Hale Jr.

Reviews

[The Seeker of Thoughts]

A sad beginning twisted suddenly at the end. This poem made me smile something I have not done in a while. Thank you for this wonderful work.