Our perfect reflections don't need second guesses.

Throw the peculiar look on today.
It's looks best when over dressed.
Make another stare to scream my name.
Screaming my name on the fragile doll.

I can't deal with it, the constant tick of...
Issues with no remedy, I so sick of...
Barrier atmosphere... We aren't here.

In the bruise I see similar effects.
I know you feel it, you detect.
A disturbance in the line. I'm not fine.
With the silence, of whats going on.

Receive my wish, a permanent gift.
Talk to me through it, and tell me you love me.

You'll perceive it all, and we won't talk.
About it.
Perfect reflections don't need second guesses.

Unravel, your distress.
Push 7 buttons to address...
The boy waiting to hear... you.

I can't deal with it, the constant tick of... (You without me.)
Issues with no remedy, I so sick of... (She's the key.)
Barrier atmosphere... We're still there. (Holding on.)
To the only things we want. (To be taken away together.)
Our perfect reflections don't need second guesses.

Author's Note

I miss Megan.

Reviews

[Antoinette]

Baby you are so wonderful! I love that you can transform all the treacherous pain we feel into one poem and it's beautiful. I am the luckiest girl in the universe because somehow I got you.

I think it is awesome that I can read each line and know exactly what you mean. You nailed it babe. Especially the last stanza, everytime I read what was in the parenthesis it was like you were reading my mind. I love you Lee.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Aww, what a nice loving poem. I enjoyed reading this. Nice work, Lee.

[Cassandra]

I wasn't good at being away from my loves (MANY poems of mine from younger days are about that) and I see you aren't either. I switched colleges to be with my first love.. so I feel your pain. But the sweetness of the reunion makes it almost worth it ;)

I really feel for you in this piece although I'm not sure about the parenthetical sentence continuation at the end...makes me think of some etherial voice finishing each line in the distance and yet your voice is filling in the lines.. it would be great if you had Megan finish in those lines.. from a female p.o.v on how she feels for you in that situation.

[Natalie C]

Aww one can tell, long distant relationships really is the pits.

Beautifully written Lee, specially loved the ending. Could almost hear the words in brackets being whispered as your heart aches just for one glance of perfection.
A love that makes you whole...

Amazing!

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

Wow this girl is so lucky...if someone wrote soemthing like this for me it would bring me to tears of joy.
This is a really beautiful piece!
Nice write!
Keep it up! =]