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Lovely body rest easy, the tightest squeeze is yet to come.
From the middle of the rotten bone, the middle of the rotten soul.
It spins and divides on it's own.

Look at where the answer lies.
Between the lines.
Look at where the sun will die.
Between the x'd eyes.

Because there is no remorse in the discourse, of this journey.
It's the goal set to take an eternity. What little you know.
Of the baffled lipstick on your face. Its the kiss of death.
Lets hope you pass that test.

(Hold your breath...
And let it win.
It what's keeping you in.)

Look at where the answer lies.
Between the lines.
Look at where the sun will die.
Between the x'd eyes.
Before the final call.
Pay what defines you all.
In the the lines, where the sun dies.

View an aerial eclipse.
Worn down windows where the widows lay.
Waiting for the wink of the extinct, they're on the brink.

Balancing for entropy.
Before the busted rusted bars of this cage.
I'm waiting to get out, to let it win...

Look at the lines.
Between them the sun will die.
Look at the x'd eyes.
Between where the answer lies.

Author's Note

When you look at some one who has no face.
Do they even care to find it?
Or do they embrace the normality of the excuse.

Reviews

[Natalie C]

Ok I have to admit, I am stumped but to be honest I am just too tired to even try and figure out this one. (I got my ideas, but are going to keep them to myself for now =] )
As with most your pieces I love to sit back and try piecing them together. Think I must come back to this one again.

But overall a great piece, I loved the feel that your created and it seemed to flow perfectly in your own special lyrical way.

[Gary H]

With your explanation I'm thinking of someone who avoids being seen, avoids life, avoids contact, just surviving, eyes not looking, face masked in make-up to conceal thoughts and revelations of their existence.
Maybe this person has died inside, could this just be a ghost that now walks or sleeps next to you?
Just thoughts.....

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I'm a bit stumped on this one myself. I think I know, but not too sure of myself. You have a very unique style of writing, and I admire the reading of your pieces and trying to fit the pieces together and understand the meaning. Nicely done.