Filthy Humans

Cold and clinicle

thoughts,

waste so much!

Thinking,

taping,

flakes-

falling-

skin breaking,

dust on surfice,

stains

discarded

bits and bobs,

crums and litter,

faeces and leftover dinner,

clutter

objects and sentiment,

filth and residue,

Unpleasant.

 

Reviews

[Saffin]

Cynical but true. This is a keeper dude

[The Musings of Mary H.]

Wonderfully used descriptive words stimulating the senses! Original thoughts on humans! Great write!

Mary

[Belle Morte]

What an eye opener. This is amazingly, and sadly, true. It's exaclty what the entire "Going Green" movement is about. This is perfect. I love it.

[Collette]

hmmm, how true. You never really notice how much waste you leave behind, until an unforgiving poet decides to remind you. Your talent is undeniable. Short and to the point, this poem hit home for me. Thank you for sharing.