Listen Close to This

Listen close to this:

To you I will be true

Forever us in bliss

For I surely love you

To you I will be true

Forever we will be

For I surely love you

Always you and me

Forever we will be

Never far apart

Always you and me

We will share a heart

Never far apart

No matter where we live

We will share a heart

And so my love I'll give

No matter where we live

Listen close to this:

And so my love I'll give

Forever us in bliss

Reviews

[Daniel Beckwith]

I see what you've tried to do, clever.

Last stanza doesn't make sense. Maybe get rid of the colon.

Good luck.