Raum Let Me See All

Raum Let Me See All

A Poem by Riordan McNew
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I wouldn't recommend any of you try to figure out what Raum is

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O! Raum you see all,

Never hesitate to answer the call.

Save us from the fall

The bold hath stole

Our gold, how pall!

Facilitate the beast's withdrawal.

Far too long he's held position.

Impossible to fully grasp the mission

'Twill not be un easy transición

When the rest'd rather be fishin!'

Marry mew now, my queen awaits,

Scared, she screams aloud our name.

Unaware she can skip the whole of the game.

Knock thrice and wish, Raum seals fates.

© 2012 Riordan McNew


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Posted 12 Years Ago


The diction was very excellent throughout this! (As well as the fluency.) A very beautiful piece indeed, even with a seemingly dark undertone even with charming notes.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The tempo is nice. I am left wondering if this is a fairy tale with an old world feel to it... Raum to me is a monstrous creature.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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