The Pills

The Pills

A Poem by Ocularfracture

One to stop the flow of pain,
Two to make me numb.
Three to lie and watch the clock, 
Four to make me dumb.
Five to lay me down to sleep,
Six to never wake.
Seven, give me one last kiss,
Eight- my soul to take.

© 2012 Ocularfracture


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Love the rhythm and the way that way that it's kind of dark yet cold and distant at the same time

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good rhythm and I like the use of numbers. Very emo indeed. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on July 7, 2012
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Tags: pills, over dose, suicide, emo

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Ocularfracture
Ocularfracture

Bennington, NE



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I've been writing since I learned how. I'm not saying that 5-year-old work was any good. All's I'm sayin' is that the passion has been there as far back as I can remember. My mother always read me sto.. more..

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