Sunday soccer

kicking the 'ol ball around

 

 

 

Shades of blue
were soft winds
this day, anew
Carried in four
leaves of green
with bud in rho.
beauty, sea of see
Mayflowers bloom
then there's me
millions a mile
from my place
gathering images
in sing and play
six stringed bling,
walks for me, paint
acoustic tapestry
in a thump and run
back street delicacy
known as taking walks
these sunny Sundays
are held, breaking life
In, as constant promise
strife is not always.
winds blow color
in one form or another
breezed by belief...

Author's Note

Reviews

[quinfinn]

you have a painters mind in this one, very strong images and some playful rhetoric to boot. (pun intended) i used to play right wing for the Pinner Green team , way back in the day....oof! what memories, snogging behind the grandstand with little Linda Wignall and getting my hands into her tiny knickers....when did i ever find time to play football? (that's soccer to these bloody yanks) well penned, my friend!

[Souladareatease]

Excellence!!! ahhh memories of the green, keeps the light shining such things...nice to step foot in those images again from time to time...and too the Linda's ...truly the right fields at the time...glory days

[Zahra]

Beautiful imagery and rhythm. Really very nice

[Souladareatease]

Thank You so much for the visit and kind comment Voice!!!
I need to visit You soon again, has been a while:)

[Acucena G.]

This is an incredible piece , keep it up

[Jack...]

Very nice, it moved along smoothly and it captured a certain sense of being. very good.

[Rita L. Sev]

"Gathering images in sing and play...paint acoustic tapestry..." Wonderfully worded imagery here. I love the uplifting feel of this poem; this was a great way to start my day! Thanks for sharing, Soul!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is remarkable. I like the flow of words.
Nice job, S:)

[Curtis Shannon]

There was a nostalgic feel to this poem. I could picture everything so clear. I really enjoyed reading this poem!

[Souladareatease]

appreciate the read and kind comment Curtis, I'm glad it conveyed.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This piece had a melody and a voice, my friend! I quite enjoyed the read, once I got into the beat. You use some interesting wordplay, which brought things up a notch or two. You always impress me with your thoughts, my friend. Well done and well penned, as always.

[Souladareatease]

Thank You SO very much Friday:) happy I could bring a notch up:) humbled by Your words!!!

[Sami Khalil]

"Shades of blue
were soft winds
this day, anew "
The opening lines drew me in to a great treat of poetry...:)

[Souladareatease]

Thank You Sami, too kind-humbled

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice tight lines with some good imagery. Great job.

[Souladareatease]

Thank You BR much appreciated!!!