Into the garden

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Looking to my side a wobbling flower
seeks respite from the downpour
corolla stroking
I lean over sheltering, Her colours
glisten like the silver cloud
lining out to Her, how
all things planted seed to be
She just smiles, happily
while earth cleanses
...breathes...
Deeply I gaze into Her Beauty
placing My hands at Her sides
as She leans in want
Her face up to mine
whispering secrets
we hold back time
watching rain drops
...still...
refracting our might
the silt parts then clay
while roots take hold
growing in path
sowed by the soul
She says to me shyly
it will be hard wont it
as I nod my head, stating
We (eeeeeee)
shall, forever blossom 

  
  

Reviews

[Androglossia]

For me, this is a celebration of feminity from a man's perspective. Flowers have long been a symbol of femininity and womanhood since early civilization. They can be used to show love, to show girls blooming into womanhood, experiencing the world and your poem shows these sorts of images. Intricate yet very beautiful. Another poem from you to be added to my faves.

[Souladareatease]

Thank You so much Marianne -humbled deeply
Indeed I do so love symbolism:)

[Shaun Payton]

Such decisive care and tenderness rings out from this piece. Such beauty that connection creates, you are marvelous with imagery and texture, and getting the reader to sense surroundings.

[Souladareatease]

You are so very Kind Shaun- I appreciate the read and kind words...I am slow at things but I promise I shall comment Your fine poems soon My friend!!!

[Shaun Payton]

Im slow some times too. Takes your time, the poetry aint going anywhere anyway:)

[Souladareatease]

:) I have read a couple- fine writes Sir!!!

[Shaun Payton]

Thank you kindly. See, ive been to many sites and often people have just said, " good write" or something along those lines.. I never been published..Never been paid..And I dont mind that..I write because I love to so much. Seems here on Writerscafe my poetry has found a home of sorts:)

[Souladareatease]

There You go:) Many times...(not all people) but many write comments such as that simplycause there are too many to comment upon...they have many friends or followers...I try to keep limited friends because of the dilemma ...people who have to comment longer than they get to write...end up saying the same old thing...they don't mean it impersonal it just comes off that way when seeing it written....but some too are just jerks.

[Shaun Payton]

Yeah I can understand lots to read, its the jerks i cant stand, in all life lol

[Saumya]

this was realllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly great....!!!!!!
well done ...!!!
:)

[Souladareatease]

So very kind Saumya!!!
I thank You Greatly!!!

[Saumya]

you are highly welcomed, my friend....!!!
:)