The Daylight Owl

 

 

 

 

 

 

White and brown
a dancer calls
    who
to the sun
as glider stride
   echoes
swoop down upon

the mind listening
    wisp
gleams in dream
token totem tales
    old
as the road
floated upon feather
    
Wile here sings
owl, and man
    listens
intentional head swivel
reading the signs
    temporal
while day breaks

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This is just so light and free, my friend. I love the imagery and the sublime texture here. I can see the scene, feel the air, smell the dawn rising in subtle warmth...fantastically sensory is this one. You have the most incredible talent for changing up your style; I'm always intrigued!!!

[Souladareatease]

I'm glad You felt it Friday thank You:) (I need to properly learn styles and writes...but I am too lazy most of the time to do this properly...so I do casually...most are just freeform...everytime I try to "learn" it hinders my creativity, for actual content-storytell or subject...this seems to get blurred because im concentrating on...how many words lines tercets etc. sigh...one day I will be able to incorporate learning knowledge while trying to express it lol

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Love when nature shares what is unseen to us, but seen by others we often ignore. Splendid read and write.

[Souladareatease]

Thank You Brandon-indeed You are correct-i can spend hours among it-Greatly appreciate Your time and kind Words Sir!!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

some people should be more like owls...wiser ----

man listens to the owl, but does he learn anything?

intriguing piece.

[Souladareatease]

many dont eh? i'll second that Jacob!!! Greatly appreciate Your time and kindness!!! (everyday we learn hopefully eh?)

[walkingman117]

I love the feel of the poem... very owl-like and cryptic...

[Souladareatease]

Thank You very much Kind Sir!!!