Heart hold

 

 

 

 

 

 

The sheets were pooled down at an angle
as I spoke from under the umbrella
held in Her comforting care
we laid there for ours
tickling fancy, sips from wetted lips
holding on to what we grabbed
the pound of flesh known as Oh'd
She had wept upon the sunrise
I had screamed into knightfall
and here we were captives
of each others beating heart
touching Heaven on shared wings
such things dispel hell on earth
living within eyes of a perfect storm
I had been hidden for such a long time
but She pulled back the cover
and there found each other
squeezing the juices lemon lime
in sugared time

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"She had wept upon the sunrise
I had screamed into knightfall
and here we were captives
of each others beating heart
touching Heaven on shared wings"
I think you are going to be the next Jack on this site if you keep writing these wonderful verses of pure love and passion...Bravo...:)

[Souladareatease]

Very kind Sami--I thank You dEEPLY Sir!!!-Be well My Friend!!!

[Sami Khalil]

Be well too friend...You are welcome...:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"captives of each other's beating heart"

love and passion in this line and in the entire poem...

beautifully expressed...and different

the one line might be "we lay there for hours"

and "other's dreams" "i had screamed into nightfall" ?


but unique imagery brings passion in the rain...

nice write

[Souladareatease]

Knightfall (manhood:) Thank You Jacob for such kind words!!!