Believe Me

Believe me when I say,
I never thought it’d work out this way.
You fell in love with me,
with something more than what you could see,
or that’s what you told me.
You’ve always said I was an open book,
and when you first told me that I made you promise not to look.
I want to be kept a mystery,
be more than the girls in your history.
You were always kind of a dream,
and had a way of tearing me apart at the seams.
It was a push and pull,
but my heart had never before felt so full.
I never thought it’d happen,
so a few fights wouldn’t dampen
my love for you
because we both knew the feelings were true.
Falling in love wasn’t something we planned,
but our instant attraction was everything but bland.
So I may not have thought we were ever possible,
but at night when you whisper those three words, barely audible,
I know my wildest dream came true
and it was forever having you. 

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Such a powerful piece to prove your honest love for another. "I want to be kept a mystery" would probably be my favorite line. It's nice to have someone you never expected, understand you on such a deep level. Communication is key, attraction isn't everything. It takes time to get to know someone, but its worth it if you're willing to risk your heart. Love is all about being honest with yourself, understanding your limits and what you will and won't expect out of someone's behavior. Don't be with someone if it doesn't feel right, if you don't feel respected or if you feel like you're being treated like an option. It's always best to fall in love with someone's personality, not just looks.

[Kiana]

I agree 100%! Thank you and Thank you so much for reading! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Like I've said to others, it's always nice seeing someone enjoyed a piece I wrote! Feel free to check out my others! x. :)

[Lysta]

I love this! Many things you wrote in the poem, like wanting to "be more than the girls in your history." strike true! The rhymes were nice as well!

[Kiana]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! It's always nice hearing someone enjoyed something I wrote! Thanks for reading! :) x.

[Lysta]

And I love enjoying others' work! ^^