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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Flash!

Flash!

A Story by Electric Fascination
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Submission for Flash Me!

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There I stood, on the apex of the mountainous cliff. Without him, my life was nothing, the world merely passed around me in sepia, movements always in slow motion. Up there was the only place I felt alive, only place I could feel my heart beating again. If I was to end this meaningless life, it was going to be there. I was on the very edge, my bare feet cutting into the sharp rock. My husband’s favorite dress of mine was soaked in mists of water. Holding onto all the memories, I jumped, preparing for our reunion in death.

© 2010 Electric Fascination


Author's Note

Electric Fascination
Gosh, that was hard keeping it down to 100 words! D:

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Impressive. I know that it's hard to keep a story that short, but that's the point. Restrictive exercises like this help you learn. Good work!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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