Drowning me lovely

Drowning me lovely

A Poem by on.my.mind
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A poem about a love interest

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You have no idea how much I miss you
So i cuddle a box of tissues
Shattered hopes are my new bestfriend
Sitting around wondering when this disappointment will end
Will I take it with me to my grave
Or will I forever be a slave
Of this passion for something
That is a continuous nothing
These hurdles will I cross
Or rise above the soft
Ground that is above me
Drowning me so lovely

Dedicated to someone 

                                 insert smiley face here lol

© 2010 on.my.mind


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. the loss of passion is something that is not easy to achieve ... even if it seems like it's for nothing ... and latent energy can be harnessed to get unbelievable results ... this is of course an amazingly expressive piece of poetry ... it has some rather precious moments in it ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Thank you all, I really appreciate.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i love it....sometimes we lose passion and this feeling always comes with sorrow,coz you feel like you are just going with the flow,but i guess i can point at your passion.it is writing:D:d...if this is not your passion, then how you wrote such sensetive piece?,wish you find peace:)
KEEP IT UP

Posted 14 Years Ago


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nice write bro

Posted 14 Years Ago


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. the loss of passion is something that is not easy to achieve ... even if it seems like it's for nothing ... and latent energy can be harnessed to get unbelievable results ... this is of course an amazingly expressive piece of poetry ... it has some rather precious moments in it ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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