Awkward...

I think things over too much

I start questioning things before I do,

my words are mixed up, I can't say anything I mean,

still I am too blame.

Sure I messed up my heart, because I trusted you,

loved you, I won't take you back.

I might be slow, but I am not no idiot,

You can't flash that smile, or wave that hat

to get my attention no more.

You are an attention w***e,

every girl's gotta have you before you know 

what you want, I'm glad you know what you want.

Here's my proposal;

I love you, then I hate you, then I'm angry at you,

I want to throw you off a cliff, an race to the bottom to catch you.

But I am done, I'm not a toy.

Author's Note

Ehh. I've done better.

Reviews

[Hiddenfire]

I have to say this is one of my favorites of yours if only for the line:
"I want to throw you off a cliff, an race to the bottom to catch you."
It describes the entire range of the emotions of love or more accurately a broken heart. The phrasing and form of the poem was also nicely done.

[Jordan's Back]

I think honestly this was the best. Your raw emotion pours out of this piece. It makes me so angry i wanna kick him in the balls

[ATG]

A very relatable and well worded poem. I agree with you though. Not your best work. The format was a little sloppy. That being said, it was still very good.

[Sunflower]

i really can relate to this, its really good. And just remember that there are so many jerks in the world you cant let one ruin your happiness (:

I love the first verse, because I can relate SO much to it. I am known for being a clumsy and awkward mess. Don't worry; I'm glad to say that he'll get what he deserves. I'm ecstatic to say that you will too! Someone will love you for only you. Love revolves around the world and it ties us together. You will find love someday! :)

[Distant horizons]

If only life came with a rule book. wonderfully heartfelt write.

[Asb]

lovely write
specially "I think things over too much
I start questioning things before I do"
"and
"I want to throw you off a cliff, an race to the bottom to catch you.
But I am done, I'm not a toy."