Hell Has No Fury worse........

I never meant any harm. I am actually a female myself and suffer from PMS myself I was just trying to be light-hearted. On a tough subject. That was all. my apologies if i offended anyone.

Hell has no fury worse

then when a woman is

 on her period.

Oh god, watch out.

she's about.

Ranting and raving,

screaming and bawling

and throwing things about.

Duck or hide, shield  your

eyes and yourself

she about.

Hide the kids,

Get the car keys and

drive like f..king hell.

Before she gets you

She means no harm.

She can not help herself

It is at that time of the month.

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

yep, excellent write that pretty much covered the topic at hand. i agree in dealing with those pesky hormones,
some humor is needed.
a write i & imagine the majority of women could relate to.

my favorite lines are the closing ones.

one teensy detail (nothing major)
and could perhaps be me...but on “she’s about.”
you added a period (ha pun intended, perhaps?) — not sure if you meant adding a comma “she’s about,” instead, or a colon as to continue to describe details.
either way, this is an enjoyable write, that sheds light on the topic.

thank you for sharing ~ x

[Onlyme]

Thank you for your comments and review. Appreciated.

[ms. barrie]

you’re welcome & i personally find coconut water and vitamin c helps esp with moods :)

[Onlyme]

Thank you for the tip. Need to try.

[Onlyme]

I learnt a lesson on this one. Even as a female myself. You have to be considerate of others feelings.

[Mrudula Rani]

You have done a brilliant writing, just that I hear men constantly blaming PMS for everything....and I foolishly assumed that it was written by a guy and went on a tirade.Sorry.

[Onlyme]

No sorrys. none needed We friends. I understand. We good.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thanks and always write what you feel you need to and you have a fan in me that appreciates your writings.

[Onlyme]

Bless you.

[Mrudula Rani]

PMS is an emotional time, because of hormonal upheaval... and if they are suffering from Endrometriosis, it is worst. Not every woman throws up a fit (for no reason)at that time of the month. Some of us silently cope with them. But you men blame every disagreement on PMS. Thanks for bringing the subject for discussion.

[Onlyme]

I never meant no harm. Iam actually a female myself and suffer from PMS myself I was just trying to be light hearted. On a tough subject. That was all.

[C.E.M.]

I personally found it charming and funny. Jokes are jokes - I think Rani might just be taking it a little too harshly/critically. Which is her right! But it's also our right to explain.... it ain't that deep.

[Mrudula Rani]

Sorry. I didn't know. Thank you for pointing out how the others treat PMS. It is brilliantly written, I am glad we are talking about it.

[Onlyme]

No problem. I actually just wrote it and put online without thinking it through. Thats me. Just do think later.

[C.E.M.]

[Onlyme]

Thanks for seeing my point of view. As in I was seeing the lighter side of it. As being funny. Not nasty.

[Mrudula Rani]

You have every reason to be glad you wrote this poem it is something natural and part of our lives.