heaven verses he'll.

Is hell really down below,

and heaven up above

who knows?

Not me.

All,  I know we live and die

and live on this planet

called earth.

Sometimes.

I think to myself!

This is hell on earth.

So,  when I die.

The pain and hurt

and evilness all around

me would stop and cease

to be. So, heaven I would

have entered.

Reviews

[Riddhi]

Your words seem so true to me...Actually , I also feel same as you sometimes...Actually , Today Man has built hell here on earth itself...Crimes are increasing at such a fast rate day by day and the emotions and feelings within people are decreasing..Instead of humans controlling technology and machines today this technology and machines are the one who control us...Every word you said was a bitter truth...
Keep on writing...

[Onlyme]

Insight comments and review Riddhi. Bless you. For taking the time to read and share your views.

[Zayir]

Interesting thoughts on heaven and hell. Coming from an atheist, I find this very thought provoking from a religious aspect.

[Lyn Anderson]

It is very human to question, and to feel like nothing much could be worse than here. But I think being here is a lesson best not cut short if we can help it, for all the beautiful people we meet along the way. P.S. Your auto correct did that annoying switch of hell to he'll in your title. That makes me nuts. Happens to me all the time.:)