When I Die?

When I die!

I would rather be

cremated and scattered.

Across the land, air and the sea.

And hopefully returning to God’s heaven

above for me.

The quickest route for me.

I would prefer...

to appear in as much.

As I am still alive

Please!

Don’t come visit me as thou, As thou

am in the graveside and mourn.

Remember me with fondness

with a little smile and a nice warm thought.

That would do,  just for me.

Death comes to us all in time.

How?  We all choose.

To find eternal

peace

is taboo

Until the final act

is upon us.

Reviews

[Gee]

I'm with you, stick me in the oven then scatter me wherever.
Now, you ain't gonna believe this, but in a more sensible moment (yes, me, sensible) I penned a poem of a similar nature called " Give me to the summer breeze"
If you get a spare minute you might enjoy, on the other hand you might well think it's a pile of shite :)

[Onlyme]

Thanks Gee for your thoughts. And your like me. Cremation. I will be going to check your poem out also. And leave a comment for you as well. :)

[Chris]

How we handle life is as important as how we think of the after.

[Onlyme]

Well said, Chris, I totally agree.

[Najam Us Saher]

I wrote a poem on similar theme titled 'Don't let my words fade'
Would love to hear your views about it, this poem is what every writer wishes for.

[Onlyme]

Thank you, Najam. For your thoughts, and of course. I will read your poem!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Onlyme]

Your was much more poetic and rythmical than mine. My own was more straight to the point me. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Yet it was creative, I did like it. ☺

[Onlyme]

I liked yours. :)