forsaken me....

forsaken me....

A Poem by Onlyme

Have you forsaken me?
                                     GONE
to DIE
           without YOU
                              by my SIDE
                                              to holding my HAND
                                &   COMFORT
 
heartbroken
                   abandoned
                                     angry
        fearful
                 
 darkness all  consuming
                               takes all
                                              death is calling  
                             

© 2018 Onlyme


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Does the one who leave us saying he/she has broken all the ties with us actually means it always....or sometimes they hide they're helplessness or compelled to do so?!...I think we should hunt for the actual reason instead wasting time in questioning....you truly write from heart Dee...thanks for sharing☺! Almighty's grace be upon you...

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WC😘!!!...
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

You really are a angel on earth Tahsin. God bless you. As I do. D.
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ouch, so sad. such deep, powerful emotion comes through. the indenting structure adds to the feel. gripping title. hope things get better ... :)

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Does the one who leave us saying he/she has broken all the ties with us actually means it always....or sometimes they hide they're helplessness or compelled to do so?!...I think we should hunt for the actual reason instead wasting time in questioning....you truly write from heart Dee...thanks for sharing☺! Almighty's grace be upon you...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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5 Years Ago

WC😘!!!...
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

You really are a angel on earth Tahsin. God bless you. As I do. D.
¿

5 Years Ago

😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Added on July 11, 2018
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Tags: forsaken, left, abandoned, alone

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Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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A Poem by Onlyme