Stuck between the devil & the deep blue sea...

Stuck between the devil & the deep blue sea...

A Poem by Onlyme

It is easy to say to someone
How are you?
but the reality is sometimes you
just don't want to hear
how much they hurt or are in pain
that sounds wicked and evil
to say that out loud.

But you are stuck between the
devil and the deep blue sea.

Swimming in deep waters also
Wishing someone would help
you float also.
Outwith them being the main
suffering in general.

He thinks you don't care you
think he does not care about you.
Around in circles, you go.

How this demonic illness takes
from you if you let it.

Cancer.

© 2018 Onlyme


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Illness is so treacherous...stealing moments you wanted to treasure forever....How are you Dearest Dee? still here and writing which means it hasn't taken everything. Hope its easing your pain a bit...maybe give you the strength to ease some of his. prayers and healing whispers.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Hi Queenie, thank you for your thoughts. And not to bad thanks. Dawn.



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Illness is devil himself. Making us suffer in pain both in body and heart .
But life is ups and downs.Things will get better for u

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

I agree totally with you Ranger. Well said sweetheart. Hugs Dawn.
Very nice use of words and thoughts.
He thinks you don't care you
think he does not care about you.
Around in circles, you go."
The circles of life can lead us to foolish places. Thank you Dawn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote, I think the major of his problems is his negative thinking. And its making his situat.. read more
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are right Dawn and you are welcome.
Strong and heart breaking words.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thank you angelink for your thoughts. Dawn.
light and ashes

5 Years Ago

You're welcome
Illness is so treacherous...stealing moments you wanted to treasure forever....How are you Dearest Dee? still here and writing which means it hasn't taken everything. Hope its easing your pain a bit...maybe give you the strength to ease some of his. prayers and healing whispers.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Hi Queenie, thank you for your thoughts. And not to bad thanks. Dawn.
Being polite in asking how people are is nice but can make us seem so robotic, especially when we know others are just being nice.

If only they could find a cure for cancer. U donate often to Stand Up For Cancer.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thanks Rock & Roll Cowboy. For your thoughts. And yes. Cancer needs kicked into touch. Dawn.
This is beautiful and it hurts. And I have no idea what to do other than applaud you for such a stunning, albeit painful (not in a bad way) piece.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thanks Bell, for your thoughtful words. hugs Dawn.

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Added on August 28, 2018
Last Updated on August 28, 2018
Tags: stuck, devil, cancer

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Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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A Poem by Onlyme



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