When I die?

When I die?

A Poem by Onlyme

When I die.

Would I choose to come
back at me?
And relive my life over again.
And correct my mistakes?

Or would I choose to be someone
else, human wise
or something else?

Like an animal, bird, shark
whatever?

And why?

Curious....got myself thinking
about those questions...

© 2018 Onlyme


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Perhaps be reborn to a wealthy family
Where everything you want can be yours - No calculating/saving/ don't rely on 'pay day loans

Had a girl worked for us > She spent all this weeks pay to pay off last weeks debts > nothing left until next week . tried to get her to cut back on inessentials _ No I need those - hair doing; face paint/powder & lipstick (this colour is out now)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

I get your drift Wild Rose. Me no wealthy family. Not into materialist stuff.
Wild Rose

5 Years Ago

May be a slightly larger motorhome for us



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this is a thought provoking piece of work made me think tonight too thanks

Posted 5 Years Ago


Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Seagull like it Julie. me not sure. Still pondering on this one myself.
if i had a choice i would come back a seagull what a life
flying over the ocean walking the sandy shores and
eating left over hot chips lol

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perhaps be reborn to a wealthy family
Where everything you want can be yours - No calculating/saving/ don't rely on 'pay day loans

Had a girl worked for us > She spent all this weeks pay to pay off last weeks debts > nothing left until next week . tried to get her to cut back on inessentials _ No I need those - hair doing; face paint/powder & lipstick (this colour is out now)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

I get your drift Wild Rose. Me no wealthy family. Not into materialist stuff.
Wild Rose

5 Years Ago

May be a slightly larger motorhome for us

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Added on September 12, 2018
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Onlyme
Onlyme

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A Poem by Onlyme