A chill crisp morn

A chill crisp morn

A Poem by Onlyme

A chilly crisp morn
The snow thick on the ground

Picture perfect scene
Of an alpine village in

Cosy, sweet and delightful to 
the eye stone and wooden  alpine lodges
and homes for the local

Intermingled between
a backdrop of a vast mountain
with snow cap peaks.

With  the valley floor
below the mountain is
 where the
village is neatly 
nested within.

The sweet smell of cakes
from the local
bakery wafting in the chilly air.

As the village starts to awaken 
to new dawn ahead.

The butcher is just opening his
shop. Lifting his shutters.

And the farm is checking on his
heard of cattle of cows and goats.

And the local children waking up
for the start of the last day of 
school before the break.

The sun is breaking. And not a cloud
in the sky.

Got a feeling this is going to be
a good day. 

© 2018 Onlyme

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Wonderful use of description dear Dawn. Made the Winter day, tempting and perfect. Nice flow of thoughts led to the perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.

Posted 3 Years Ago

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3 Years Ago

Glad you like it Coyote, Thanks for your kindness. Dawn.
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Always my pleasure dear Dawn. I love your work and you are welcome my friend.

3 Years Ago

your too kind Coyote to me. Bless you. Dawn.

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Added on December 22, 2018
Last Updated on December 22, 2018
Tags: chill, crisp, morn, snow, village, Alpine, Mountain, Switzerland



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