Perfect Picture

I picture you perfect,
As I once did before,
I picture you perfect,
As you enter through my door,

I looked into your eyes,
And I saw my very soul,
I never want to loose you,
Or to ever let you go,

I was caught in a perfect picture,
The day you took me home,
Because I picture you perfect,
I am not alone.

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

The last line here seems as if it does not belong, I can't explain it, but it just doesn't. This is better written than the past few I've read (no offence intended!), and I only spot one error regarding the use of "loose," it should be "lose."
Well done.