connections

connections

A Poem by osal
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connections with your mind and with the unknown

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It’s funny isn't it? How memories can be half in your memory and half-forgotten at the same time. It’s amazing that you can’t remember facts on your book but more than 700 people’s names and their backgrounds. How imagination can make things that is said to be impossible and how from a sound or smell of a memory it just appears out of nowhere. It’s an enjoyable feeling that we can’t put our finger on. Maybe your mind has places we have never thought of. Just Fragments of memories roaming around your mind like clouds. Do you know yourself, truly? If not why are you trying to understand others? Why can’t you sit in a corner and explore yourself more. Maybe in that way you can find your true self and not the outer ghost that makes your decisions

© 2016 osal


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osal
what do you think of it please review

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I like that you pointed out most of is try to understand other while not fully understanding ourselves. Reminds of "He who is without sin casts the first stone". I feel like it would hit harder of it was more spaced out, but at the same time the way it's all together and bold makes it seem like it was a random epiphany.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

osal

9 Years Ago

thanks I appreciate it
and also thank you for being my first reviewer :)



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I like that you pointed out most of is try to understand other while not fully understanding ourselves. Reminds of "He who is without sin casts the first stone". I feel like it would hit harder of it was more spaced out, but at the same time the way it's all together and bold makes it seem like it was a random epiphany.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

osal

9 Years Ago

thanks I appreciate it
and also thank you for being my first reviewer :)

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Added on January 30, 2016
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osal
osal

kandy, Sri Lanka



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