The Hilltop

Watching the Sunset with my lover

 

We watched in wonder as she died

Her farewell colours deep inside

Our souls

The sky was etched

We gazed in wonder

Witnesses to something

Almost divine -

A brief and fleeting

Moment in time, now

Forever yours and mine

We bade farewell to another day

And we watched the colours fade away

To black

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful. great description of a day ending.

[Steph]

i really love the personification of the sun and how you describe the sunset. great job :)
~Steph

[Greg Skura]

This is a beautiful tribute to that which we all enjoy! Thank you for sharing!

[Eileen]

Very deep and complicated. I love it. It reminds me of a song I wrote. Great write.