Ra's Champagne

spring morning

 

 

Goldfinches rise

as bubbles

 

from the bottom of a

champagne glass

 

in a race to reach

the crystal rim

 

swallowed into

the mouth of Ra

Reviews

[Lorry]

What a delightful description of a spring morning. It almost made me forget myself and dare to dream of wearing only six layers instead of the usual 8! (God, I need a holiday!)
😃

[Patricia]

Thank you Lorry! You made me smile ;) It was a beautiful sight.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Love the reference to the sun god.
Those lucky finches...we are all finches trying to reach some god in the sky.
So much said in few words.
Nice to see you around again, Patricia. Have missed your writing.
j.

[Patricia]

Thank you j. it was a beautiful sight on a beautiful day. Glad to be back. New keyboard on my laptop and new battery and it seems to be working pretty good so far.

[Beren]

Oh wow! What a poem! I loved this style of narration. I can taste this.

[Patricia]

Thank you Beren, glad you enjoyed it.