Pride: party of one

Bits of my tongue are all I have left
And as for my heart well I guess it's even less

I've chewed them to nothing and tossed them out
All for your closed lips and prideful pout

Reviews

[Muse]

I suggest less talking with your mouthful. ha ha ha

Clever work.

[Addy]

Nice rhyme. Short but consise. Good job.

[A. Amos]

Short yet powerful, honest and direct... Your talent shines my friend!

[Justin]

that was really good, it had alot of emotion in it, we sometimes sacrifice believes and things like that to please other people

[Revery]

Short but says a lot. Nicely penned. Nice rhyme and meter as well.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sometimes we sacrifice a bit of ourselves when being there for another unconditionally.