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A Poem by Palmer Blu

Experiencing the pain of being betrayed by someone you love takes courage. But in the after mass of the battle you left helpless. Sometimes you just feel Attacked.


Shaken, beaten, and destroyed by love

Bruised and scarred as if I have been abused with a club

Need some help to pick up the pieces

Time heals all wounds, but currently I only feel times ripples and creases


Death....Heart dead, killed by you

Emotionally barren, not knowing what to do

Oxygen passes by but lungs refuse

Feelings incomplete and no longer of use


Broken, taken, rejected so much

Requiring your affection; desiring your  touch

fear dwells deep-deeper than is known

Now y bed is cold and I no longer feel at home


Doom, despair- A black, dark void

Can't help feeling pissed off and annoyed

Turning and twisting, unable to sleep

Constantly falling, life ending without your keep


Held, let go- now left to waste

No longer can have you, you left with much haste

Dreams destroyed-no longer can have a vision so good

Could let go, would let go, but don't think I should



Devastated, emotional- hanging my head

Knowing no mercy, wishing to be held

Long lasting pain dealt out at your hand

Love has become the enemy, from this heart- banned


Turmoil, conflicted, at a loss for words

Confused by the feeling of being a bug being eaten by a bird

Confused by the affection that you gave

Now with a crushed heart, don't know how to behave


Shattered, battered- Having no shield

You were relentless, destroying me- No yield

People attempt at resurrection and healing

But none of the ideas seem appeasing


Shaken, beaten, destroyed- lifeless from that

has been stabbed, slashed- ultimately ATTACKED

© 2011 Palmer Blu

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Added on October 23, 2011
Last Updated on November 28, 2011
Tags: Heartbreak, Pain, Vicious, Emotional


Palmer Blu
Palmer Blu

Charleston, SC

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