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when i cant sleep at night

its to hot

or your on my mind

i think of summer

i think of you

when you were next to me

everything was great

or so i thought

if you didn't want it

why did you proceed

if you didn't want it

it didn't have to be

if you didn't want it

and you didn't want me

nothing had to happen

and we both could be free

but I'm tied to you

like rain in a cloud

like clichés in a 13 year old

like hopes in a heart

and now its not over

it will never be over

and thats exactly how you want it

Author's Note

you wont get this one either

Reviews

[L.G. Knight]

I do get it...
or atleast, I get what I get from it....
It's hard having the one that got away but will never really be gone,
because you'll always think about him about how you wanted it to be.
You'll always think about what happened about how it could have been different.
You'll always let your experiance with them effect how you handle new situations that come up,
and how you see things around you. And you will alway always love them no matter what you do...

So even though its over its never really over...

This was very well written and though it could use some punctuation and grammar editing it was over all a wonderful piece of poetry and I am ver glad you shared it! Thanks!

~Frances~