Streets of Glasgow

5 days, a month, a year of euphoria
No ties, no times, no heaven’s glory, a
Buzzing that’s felt from the heart to the feet
It melts the snow with its own drumbeat

Going is freedom, I’m free alone
I love all people, but more my home,
I love all bricks and weeds and coal
I’m grateful to them for my forming soul

The streets shake now wherever we step
Let that be a promise and not a threat,
Among the clouds, rain, whitened weather
Share the music, now walk together

Author's Note

Any reviews welcome!

Reviews

[KCthelastboyscout]

Sounds like a place to go and get lost.t for the pleasure of it.Credit due to the writer.
Very welcoming

[Mari' Emeraude]

Lovely poem. A rich imagery with the the bricks, coal and weeds. I just adore anything about Scotland!

[Nolo Segundo]

Very, very nice! As a part Scot (1/4), and having visited Scotland several times, I can relate to its unique qualities. The 1st stanza is near perfect, by the way.

[¿]

I'd love to visit Glasgow after reading this....I love all people, but more my home - great scribble dude!

[Dave Brown]

Thanks for your review.
I don't seem to be able to answer in the correct location which gave me a chance to read some of your work
Very very impressive

[Onlyme]

A true Glaswegian. Through and through!

[paperwizards]

Thankyou! Nothing makes me prouder than to call myself that.

[Onlyme]

tàkes one to know one.

[Chris Shaw]

You must be a proud Glaswegian. Loved your poem, well written.

Chris

[paperwizards]

Thanks for this! It really means a lot to have feedback on my poetry

[emipoemi]

.........I have no words.....my voice is in my awe!! You truly live up to your name of "paper wizards". Well done!

[paperwizards]

You are too kind! Thankyou so much for your reviews :)

[emipoemi]

my pleasure.