I'm Just a Stranger Lost in the Crowd

I'm Just a Stranger Lost in the Crowd

A Poem by Lyan
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This is actually lyrics that I wrote in 2005. Transition between middle school and high school. One of my first attempts at writing lyrics.

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"I'm Just a Stranger Lost in the Crowd"
Who is that girl standing?
Am I really who I want to be?
There are thoughts going through in my mind
About everything I'm going through
What is happening to me?
Who am I?
Chorus
I'm just a stranger lost in the crowd
Caught in the middle of a phase
I don't know where I belong
Where is the way
What should I wear
Who are my friends
I'm just a stranger lost in the crowd
I'm trying to be cool
But I feel like a fool
I'm losing myself
I'm trying to fit in
But when I look in the mirror
I realize
chorus repeated (2x)

© 2014 Lyan


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A very nice lyrical poem.Everyone goes through this phase wanting to blend in,wanting to be the head turner.. A sweet li'l poem with a wonderful message. :)

~Sophy

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyan

9 Years Ago

Thank you Sophy
Deep and constant emotion. I like how you wove the chorus into the piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyan

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Very relatable lyrics which is what makes this a hit.
So many of us have this way at this life stage.
Good write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyan

9 Years Ago

Thank you.I'm glad that they are relatable:)
These are special lyrics, they say so much, it's truly important at that age, to find out who you are, and where you stand for. I treasure it you posted them. Could sound fantastic with acoustic guitar...
Thank you for sharing a piece from back in the days, (lovely to see when we mature how things change)...

- My best,
Elisa

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyan

9 Years Ago

Thank you Elisa.I appreciate the very nice comments:)

9 Years Ago

It is my pleasure Lyan :)
I like this one a lot, especially knowing how much you moved around before. Starting over in a new place at a new school is hard enough without not knowing any of the people around you, but you pulled through and became a social butterfly, which was just so brave of you.

This is also a perfect representation of that age in general. We are all trying to figure out where we belong and who we belong with, feeling like a stranger in the crowd as you said. Beautiful song Lyana, I bet it would sound great put to music.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyan

9 Years Ago

Thank you Ashira:) actually it's one of my all time songs that I have written! I think it's because .. read more
Ashira Macy

9 Years Ago

It most definitely is. It could be an age anthem!

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