Don't be like me.

Don't be like me.

A Poem by We are young.

My actions

are effecting you

Your reactions

Are hurting me.

I need to stop this.

Stop acting like me

Don't be like me.

So beautiful inside and out

Theres not even a doubt.

You dont see it maybe you never will.

But I before you do this just remeber it kills.

Changes apperance sure.

Kills the soul inside of you until it burns.

Don't do this.

Don't be like me.

Don't think for a moment I wont defend you.

I will stop being your friend if thats what it takes.

If I have to seperate myself from you

It will kill me so deep inside.

But I wont let me ruin your life.

Dont apoligize to me

Apoligize to your self.

Why cant you see?

Just open your eyes.

I can't stop what you do.

I can stop my effects on you though.

Don't do this

Dont be like me.

It's not fun and its not a game.

I beg

I doubt it will work

Im scared

and wondering what I have done.

I'm sorry to you

You better except.

I wont let you do this.

Don't be like this.

It's not good.

Stop.

Think.

Listen to my begs and pleads don't be like me.

 

© 2009 We are young.


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God what loveliness ,i read behind the words and i could see why never want him to be..never be like me..
Dont be like me ,beautiful inside out,there is not even a doubt,you never see it ,you never will
before you do thid remember it could kill,kills the soul inside of you and it burns
I will defend you ,will stop being your friend if thats what it takes
lovely lovely write,how i enjoyed it..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Deeply moving, through conversational pieces and streams of thought. The haunting emotion seems to trap you, and you cry out against it and those who would follow. So vivid and real.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on June 14, 2009
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We are young.
We are young.

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