Distance and Love

a Sonnet that I wrote along time ago (which follows all the rules i might add). This was when I was having love but the distance was the cause to have a failed atempt.

Separate by many times of cursed fate

Longing road of searching doom gaze for her

Hoping to forward unlocking faith’s gate

Ever traveling closer I fear a Blur

 

Painful for myself and her we will scream

Malevolence distance forge blood to drain

Sustain our love I see only a dream

With emotion I conceive but bring her pain

 

Outskirt miles between her I make out

Distances is a devil’s plead harmful lust

Seeking a way to her without a doubt

Though in pain we learned to induce a trust

 

In Sync we are soaring as a white dove

Even with our hearts as one we find love

Reviews

[Gone]

Nice work. Sonnets are difficult to get right. You have done very well keeping to the discipline. Your story comes through clearly and every stanza hold the readers attention.