Circles In Sand

Did our abuse, harm and neglect for these lands begin with such a passion and love? Have we all gone mad in our rape of the planet?

...And the green island beach was so beautiful

That the man walked along in aged circles, forever and ever.

The placid rhythm of his mint heart, in time

With the beat of the bellowing waves - pounding.

Lonely. Except for sight of his own trails

In the sand - and his reflection in the sea -

Though content that the island and each vision

Of blue, green and gold was no other man's. His...

Reviews

[Emily Elizabeth]

Fantastic poem! The colourful, interesting way you've presented it and written it really gets your points across. It's maybe a bit too short, but a wonderful read all the same. Great job!

[Catriona Elliott]

I really like the theme and imagery in this one.

[Liam]

This is wonderful because it has such a good point, with beautiful imagery on top. Top notch!

[Alyssa!!!]

wow thats beautiful!!