untitiled

tonight I go up against

the devil

tonight I play chicken with the sun

tonight the burning world

was started by me.

tonight I fight infinity.

Reviews

[Dalebear]

This is a god poem

[.]

. ah, this is unforgettable and un-get-over-able ... amazingly inspiring ...

you play truant
i play chicken
you are aberrant
and i am stricken
your divinity
is my infinity
and my infinity
lives in 'tonight'

[...]

let bare bridges remain
and rusty rivers flow
clocks are not anti-clock wise
and parallel lines never meet

the fight continues
and startling it might seem
but it is ambitious
only ash has ever remained

[Emily B]

what is the devil? just the darker side of ourselves . . . to not dare the fire seems absurd

we fight every day, so often our own worst enemy is ourself

[...]

. ah! ... and you shall succeed ... it really is as simple as that ... determination ... you own profundity ... remarkable ...