it was meant to be different

theres poem s in the whisky jar

but not good ones

theres love in the air

but not for me.

and the wind teases

changing direction

and the stars

are out of order.

it was meant  to be different

Reviews

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. yup, yup, yup ... the universe is one helluva tantalizing devil ... oh, how obnoxious it is ... but you know ... and so we know ... and if there's any chance at all ... that we might be able to make a difference ... it's because of you ...

the poet knew
but the universe didn't
he saw through
the see-through universe

. and i love the mention of those whiskey jars ... and the disorders of the stars ... there's always so much poetry to learn from ya, coach ...

[Dalebear]

This was sweet, lovely and beautiful poem.

Dalebear

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

This was lovely,lovely and lovely :)..yes i am excited cause this was good..so short yet very well thought of and written..I just like how it starts 'there are poems in the whisky jar'..well poems can be anywhere :) hung from branches of trees,blue clouds and perhaps a garbage tin too..that is how about poems they can be anywhere.You said it so simply and all of it seems so easy on the eye yet when one reads deep enough one know you have said it all...when you said 'the stars are out of order ..it was meant to be different'..Love could be all around you physically manifesting itself but truth lies in your finding love within yourself..:).